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Dear Blank;

It's me, that little girl,
The one you always called "dear".
You'd pick me up in your arms,
And tell me stories of life with your lover.
She was by your side, right up until the end.
She never let you go, she still hasn't.
Neither have I.

I did it. I did it for you, and for me.
I'm done high school, I graduated and grew.
I was going to show you, come by and surprise you both.
To see you smile, just one last time would have made it a bit easier.
I miss you.

I know you won't see this,
And I know you won't ever know any of this,
But you meant so much to me.
The memories with you will be etched in my brain.
I promise I won't forget.

When I saw you, the sun was smiling,
Shining ever so brightly.
I felt ever so bitter. Why shine now?
When you've just taken him away.
Why take him away?

I look out now, and the sky is crying.
Crying like I did when I saw you.
Seeing the horrible mistake it was,
Yet knowing it was time.
So just cry, let it out like I did.
Crying is okay sometimes.

It's okay though, when you died,
You died being loved,
By everyone
I love you.

From: Your "dear"
Umm I don't really know what I want to say to this. Let me know what you think.
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:iconjaiqwq:
jaiqwq Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011
This is good!!!!!! seriously!
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darknightforever Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011
BLARG! No :3
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jaiqwq Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011
yes!
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:icondarknightforever:
darknightforever Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011
NU! Wait, what are we yes/no - ing?
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jaiqwq Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011
um... itunes?
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:icondarknightforever:
darknightforever Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011
Right, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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:iconjaiqwq:
jaiqwq Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011
Why not??????? its not that bad D:
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darknightforever Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2011
I dunno lol its what everyone has .... I DO NOT CONFORM!!!!! XD
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Mylucifel Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
... This reminds me of my aunt who literally just passed away. This poem is amazing, and a great way to convey feelings for those lost.
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darknightforever Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010
Actually, this was written about my grandfather who passed away
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Mylucifel Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:O
I almost had the thought of someone else that you could be writing it about, but I am glad that my true thought was off, and it did stem from family.
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darknightforever Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2010
Who else did you think it could have been written about?
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:iconmylucifel:
Mylucifel Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
... You do not wanna know >.<
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darknightforever Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2010
Okie, I won't ask. I'm here if you want/need to talk :3
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Mylucifel Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay, and the same goes for you to me :D I is here if you need to talk :3
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darknightforever Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010
Mkaii thanks <3 ^^
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xxShadowexx Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2010
i just... never read this, apparently.

and it's.
too much.

it was incredible.
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darknightforever Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2010
It's been known to give people that same reaction before ... It was, a really hard thing for me. I ... I ... I still cry when I think about it too much, or hear something that makes me think of it ... Have I told you the whole story?
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xxShadowexx Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2010
not the whole story, no.

i don't think so anyways.
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:icondarknightforever:
darknightforever Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010
If you want, I'll tell you.
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:iconxxshadowexx:
xxShadowexx Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010
only if you're comfortable with it.
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darknightforever Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010
Oh yes, I'm quite fine with it. There isn't anything I can do to change it. I'll send you an email I suppose?
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xxShadowexx Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010
or skype. :P
skype works too. : )
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darknightforever Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010
Yes well as I was going to send YOU and email, I got one from one of the Japanese kids, and the my inbox flooded with facebook and with MY attention span, I failed ^^;
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Elvengirl6281 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010
this is amazing yet very heart breaking. It is a skirt around some of the facts but with the proper thoughts and reading between the lines I understand what you are saying. It is always sad when someone leaves. Whether it be through death or through life. It will always happen either way. I am sorry for your sorrow. This is wonderful poetry and a wonderful flow to your words.
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darknightforever Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2010
It's a sort of letter of things i was going to say to my grandfather. It really did hurt a lot. And I hadn't seen him in a while and I was really looking forward to seeing him. I knew that he was really sick and that he was dying, but it wasn't supposed to be this soon. Though I am glad it happened now, because I'm still at home and he died in his sleep. I leave for Tasmania/Australia in 2 weeks and it would have been a lot worse if it had happened while I was gone.
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Lycanruler Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
its amazing, like i said before, you can feel the emotions :hug:
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darknightforever Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010
Thanks
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Lycanruler Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
np ^^ <3
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namara-ashina Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2010
:hug:
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darknightforever Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010
:hug:
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