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Do I even know you?
You're that girl I always see
Through the corner of my eyes
The one I want to be
Now you're lost
Hidden away
Locked in the back of my mind

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Where are you?
Please come out
I found the key to my memory
I know you
But only,
Because you cared

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Why can't I find you?
You were here
I saw you here not long ago
Lost again
Can't ever win this game I play

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Gone forever
Memories fading away
Slowly
But I don't ever want to forget
That light that you had
The smile that you gave me

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Lost forever
Within my endless thoughts,
Regrets and emotions

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Take a break
Release,
It all back into the night
As I lay down under
This starry sky

~Wishing you here~
OKAY this is a first. I like this poem ... I REALLY like it, cept the title but oh well. It's weird. I find it's a lot longer than my other poems, but that it's not long enough? I don't know. I really would enjoy feedback in any way shape or form, be it negative or positive. I hope you like it as much as I do ... ~
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DebbieSempai Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010   Writer
I like it (:
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darknightforever Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010
:heart: You and me both :P
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namara-ashina Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010
lol soon you'll have enough poems to make a book XD
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:icondarknightforever:
darknightforever Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010
BLAHG not a very good book ... BUT THIS ONE IS AMAZING! <3 What do you think?
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:iconnamara-ashina:
namara-ashina Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010
it IS really awesome ^.^
and it'll still be an awesome book :P
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:icondarknightforever:
darknightforever Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010
I roll my eyes at you >.> xD
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:iconnamara-ashina:
namara-ashina Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2010
:D
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xxShadowexx Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010
dun ferget~ 8D
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darknightforever Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010
Don't forget what? D: OH NOES I FORGOT
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xxShadowexx Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010
OH NOES. :ohnoes:
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