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Do I even know you?
You're that girl I always see
Through the corner of my eyes
The one I want to be
Now you're lost
Hidden away
Locked in the back of my mind
-
Where are you?
Please come out
I found the key to my memory
I know you
But only,
Because you cared
-
Why can't I find you?
You were here
I saw you here not long ago
Lost again
Can't ever win this game I play
-
Gone forever
Memories fading away
Slowly
But I don't ever want to forget
That light that you had
The smile that you gave me
-
Lost forever
Within my endless thoughts,
Regrets and emotions
-
Take a break
Release,
It all back into the night
As I lay down under
This starry sky
~Wishing you here~
You're that girl I always see
Through the corner of my eyes
The one I want to be
Now you're lost
Hidden away
Locked in the back of my mind
-
Where are you?
Please come out
I found the key to my memory
I know you
But only,
Because you cared
-
Why can't I find you?
You were here
I saw you here not long ago
Lost again
Can't ever win this game I play
-
Gone forever
Memories fading away
Slowly
But I don't ever want to forget
That light that you had
The smile that you gave me
-
Lost forever
Within my endless thoughts,
Regrets and emotions
-
Take a break
Release,
It all back into the night
As I lay down under
This starry sky
~Wishing you here~
OKAY this is a first. I like this poem ... I REALLY like it, cept the title but oh well. It's weird. I find it's a lot longer than my other poems, but that it's not long enough? I don't know. I really would enjoy feedback in any way shape or form, be it negative or positive. I hope you like it as much as I do ... ~
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I love this poem, it kinda mixes in with one I'm feeling right now
(Totally not emo)
(Totally not emo)